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As night consumes you all around
Your breathing is the only sound
The heat of flesh and a thumping heart
Life I say, is the most beautiful of art
Your beauty shadows all the rest
Hold your tongue, I'm not done yet
The silken hair that’s on your head
The sparkling orbs with tears you shed
The voice that softens at my name
The smooth soft skin that shines in rain
The long dark lashes when they blink
Darling, I'm going to reach my brink
Like a star you’re always there
And with everything you do, I always care
If you were Saturn, I’d be the rings
All around, like angel wings
As you whisper, fear in voice
Dying for you, is now my choice
But beauty’s always meant to last
So live you may, my words are cast<i>
Your breathing is the only sound
The heat of flesh and a thumping heart
Life I say, is the most beautiful of art
Your beauty shadows all the rest
Hold your tongue, I'm not done yet
The silken hair that’s on your head
The sparkling orbs with tears you shed
The voice that softens at my name
The smooth soft skin that shines in rain
The long dark lashes when they blink
Darling, I'm going to reach my brink
Like a star you’re always there
And with everything you do, I always care
If you were Saturn, I’d be the rings
All around, like angel wings
As you whisper, fear in voice
Dying for you, is now my choice
But beauty’s always meant to last
So live you may, my words are cast<i>
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I really hope this doesn't make me sound like a lesbian or a really manly-ish girl. LOS
So, I am submiting this because it's something to, well, submit! ...Further more, I am writing a story and in it, theres an assignment, this assignment is writing a poem thingy...and naming the object of inspiration. Which is a girl, keep in mind I'm writing this in his point of view.(My chracter that is, Elliot.) Whom had gotten the asignment as did she! (Girl character.) Not that any of you care, just have alot of time on my hands at the moment.
It's crappy and cheap, I know. It also may be confusing, but it relates to the plot of what I'm writing. :3
So, I am submiting this because it's something to, well, submit! ...Further more, I am writing a story and in it, theres an assignment, this assignment is writing a poem thingy...and naming the object of inspiration. Which is a girl, keep in mind I'm writing this in his point of view.(My chracter that is, Elliot.) Whom had gotten the asignment as did she! (Girl character.) Not that any of you care, just have alot of time on my hands at the moment.
It's crappy and cheap, I know. It also may be confusing, but it relates to the plot of what I'm writing. :3
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I thought it was nice. Not confusing at all methinks...
I can't say much though, as I'm kind of a newblit when it comes to poetry...
*newblit... that's a funny word, lol
I can't say much though, as I'm kind of a newblit when it comes to poetry...
*newblit... that's a funny word, lol